©vinsquila drawings

[Akonyl]

I approve of all the drawings in hea \o/

my only real suggestion would be for the Akemi/Akai pic: Though I can't say how to do it (as I've never used SAI :V) , you might want to try to kill those faint white lines around them that sort of separate them from the background.

aside from that: Artists tend to see more faults with their own work than others, so don't think badly of your work when other people say it's awesome.

[Aokochan]

Wow! This dragon is awesome!! Sorry, but I don't have any ideas... But I think the drawing is nice as it is! Maybe you could add people celebrating the New Year in China, or something like this. (sorry, sometimes I don't have imagination )

thank god I found this forum :D;D everyone's nice here <3<3

so I'm extremely happy when someone replies to my post, no matter it's compliment or critic, it means that at least they care :3:3

<3 <3 <3 And you're very nice too!!

[rrizqiw]

you seem obsessive with the mouth and lips.

my advise to you is learn to use thin-bold line more carefully

awesome work anyway

[silverbullet4869]

@Yuri-san
uwaaah! the tutorial would be so much help for me thank u sooo much ^^

@Akonyl-san

I approve of all the drawings in hea \o/

my only real suggestion would be for the Akemi/Akai pic: Though I can't say how to do it (as I've never used SAI :V) , you might want to try to kill those faint white lines around them that sort of separate them from the background.

aside from that: Artists tend to see more faults with their own work than others, so don't think badly of your work when other people say it's awesome.

thank u! yes I've tried to do it using photoshop but because the file's size is too big the photoshop crashed.....if only I didn't forget to save the drawing as sai files but I will reduce the file's size then try to fix the white lines. thanks for the advices and for the brilliant words n_n

@aokochan

Wow! This dragon is awesome!! Sorry, but I don't have any ideas... But I think the drawing is nice as it is! Maybe you could add people celebrating the New Year in China, or something like this. (sorry, sometimes I don't have imagination )

thank god I found this forum :D;D everyone's nice here <3<3

so I'm extremely happy when someone replies to my post, no matter it's compliment or critic, it means that at least they care :3:3

<3 <3 <3 And you're very nice too!!

It's okay! you gave me an idea after all, you don't have to worry and be sorry! or else I'll feel bad making an truly nice person like you feel guilty for something that's not even a mistake and I'm not nice! I'm just an overly pessimistic.
last thing, I have an (extreme ridiculous) idea, I want to make a drawing of akai's back with a dragon tatoo on it. but then that would be like what I said before, it's as if the theme is only "dragon". what do u think?

@rrizqiw

you seem obsessive with the mouth and lips.

my advise to you is learn to use thin-bold line more carefully

awesome work anyway

thank u for the advices! You're right, drawing mouths is my weakness xD

[rrizqiw]

thank u for the advices! You're right, drawing mouths is my weakness xD

drawing mouth is not you weakness. you just obsessive with it. if you look at Gosho art. his mouth is very not detail. probably just one piece of line.

i am not saying this is bad thing since i am not expect you to copy Gosho art 100% i am just saying you put focus on lips.

and thin-bold line is advice as whole

[Incomplete-tantei]

@silverbullet4869 : All your drawings are awesome especially BO *clap* , it's cool you drew One Piece characters too!
If I ever come up with ideas with the dragon I'll let you know.

[Aokochan]

@silverbullet4869: Yes you ARE nice!! But try to see the good side of things, life is better with optimism, trust me!
I think the tatoo of the dragon is a good idea! How about making a drawing with Akai showing his back, and looking himself on a mirror, in which we can see his face? This way we could see Akai's back and face at the same time! Also, what's the problem about the theme being "dragon"? The important thing it's that the drawing is good!

[silverbullet4869]

@rrizqiw

thank u for the advices! You're right, drawing mouths is my weakness xD

drawing mouth is not you weakness. you just obsessive with it. if you look at Gosho art. his mouth is very not detail. probably just one piece of line.

i am not saying this is bad thing since i am not expect you to copy Gosho art 100% i am just saying you put focus on lips.

and thin-bold line is advice as whole

still, thanks I will take your advice, if you don't mind would u please tell me your comment about my dragon drawing? sorry if I ask too much m(_ _)m

@incomplete tantei-san

@silverbullet4869 : All your drawings are awesome especially BO *clap* , it's cool you drew One Piece characters too!
If I ever come up with ideas with the dragon I'll let you know.

yay mouss-san! (sorry if I misspelled your name) thank u for prasing my works! and yes please let me know! ^^

@aokochan

@silverbullet4869: Yes you ARE nice!! But try to see the good side of things, life is better with optimism, trust me!
I think the tatoo of the dragon is a good idea! How about making a drawing with Akai showing his back, and looking himself on a mirror, in which we can see his face? This way we could see Akai's back and face at the same time! Also, what's the problem about the theme being "dragon"? The important thing it's that the drawing is good!

You're way nicer
not good, you're spoiling me too much xD I'll become an even-more spoiled brat in no time xD
nice idea! thanks for helping me so many times!

[Conia]

The Akai+Akemi picture is gorgeous *.*

[aly_angelflight]

Well, the dragon needs to look more alive IMO... it needs to interact with something in the drawing.

(Not saying that the dragon looks bad, of course. It just looks a tad bit too statue-like in its present state. ^^;)

[rrizqiw]

you dragon drawing is awesome and i like how you put lot of detail on the scale.

but still my general advice is to use thin-thick line more effective. IMo that can make it more awesome

[silverbullet4869]

@conia-san

The Akai+Akemi picture is gorgeous *.*

thank u conia-san! ur gifs' are all osm too!

Well, the dragon needs to look more alive IMO... it needs to interact with something in the drawing.

(Not saying that the dragon looks bad, of course. It just looks a tad bit too statue-like in its present state. ^^;)

right but I don't know what/who should interact with it :/ any idea? oh, and thanks btw

you dragon drawing is awesome and i like how you put lot of detail on the scale.

but still my general advice is to use thin-thick line more effective. IMo that can make it more awesome

I will add pressure and thicken some lines for sure thank u

[Holmes]

Dam, not only the dragon looks awesome, but also it´s drawn excellently. (The scales OMG!)

One little thing, shade the eyeball and give him life! (as the chinese say when finishing the dragon and tiger costumes)

[Incomplete-tantei]

@incomplete tantei-san

@silverbullet4869 : All your drawings are awesome especially BO *clap* , it's cool you drew One Piece characters too!
If I ever come up with ideas with the dragon I'll let you know.

yay mouss-san! (sorry if I misspelled your name) thank u for prasing my works! and yes please let me know! ^^

Nah that's the right spelling ^^ . And you don't have to add the "-san" suffix at the end xD
But if you really want to call me like that I won't care xD

And looks like you won't need to worry too much about your drawing since many people say it's drawn very well ^^
For the dragon you maybe need to look at other dragons and see some common relevant characteristics and add them to your dragon. But maybe your dragon is just perfect  and I'm talking nonesense :p

[silverbullet4869]

@holmes

Dam, not only the dragon looks awesome, but also it´s drawn excellently. (The scales OMG!)

One little thing, shade the eyeball and give him life! (as the chinese say when finishing the dragon and tiger costumes)

thanks! took me a whole day to finish the dragon o_O and wow you sure know a lot how should I draw his eyeball so it'll give him a scary and ferocious look?

Nah that's the right spelling ^^ . And you don't have to add the "-san" suffix at the end xD
But if you really want to call me like that I won't care xD

And looks like you won't need to worry too much about your drawing since many people say it's drawn very well ^^
For the dragon you maybe need to look at other dragons and see some common relevant characteristics and add them to your dragon. But maybe your dragon is just perfect  and I'm talking nonesense :p

thank u! no you're not talking non-sense at all that's a good idea that I didn't even think of (idiot)