my synopsis and summary
Posted: May 31st, 2010, 5:05 pm
finally, my book is edited and it's finally time to look for an agent. Just before that, I wanted to know what you think of my summary and synopsis (comments will be appriciated). it's a short read so I hope you don't mind. (note though that this is not professionally, so please bear with the possible grammar mistakes and bad choice of words
(a little disclaimer first: a certain concept which is present in Gosho's work, is also in mine, however it is NOT a ripoff from Gosho, since I started to plan the plot way before I started to watch DC. I think the first time I was introduced to that certain concept was in an episode from the Power Rangers.)
first of all, a really really really really brief and short summary of the book for the query letter:
After returning from his last job, Mardock, the most famous Demon-Slayer in Nardalach, gets attacked by a young girl called Sapphire, a demon from the strongest race of the demon world, the Daemon race. After a short fight, Mardock gets the upper hand, but instead of slaying the demon, he pities her and uses a special seal, which not only strips Sapphire from her demonic abilities, but also turns her into a child and gives her human-like emotions.
Now unable to get back to the demon world in her present state, Sapphire is forced to go with the Demon-Slayer and live with him and his two apprentices, Rye and Iris, at least until Mardock decides to release her from the seal or someone comes to look for her.
While living in the world of humans and accompanying the Demon-Slayer in their adventures, Sapphire slowly learns that having emotions and living like a human isn't all that bad.
However, things get dangerous when a mysterious man, called Xor*, sets his plan in motion which Sapphire plays a heavy role in, and it's up on the Demon-Slayers to stop him
*Xor is pronounced as Zor (like Xena.....or any other word that starts with X in english....I think). I was told by someone that the name Zor simply resembles "Zorro" so I should change it.
now for my worst nightmere - the synopsis. I think the reason why every author hates to write it so much is because so much is left out and it's dull, it doesn't have the true depth of the story, and it's impossible to write it without countless of plot-holes.
So anyway, here it is.
any thoughts?
(a little disclaimer first: a certain concept which is present in Gosho's work, is also in mine, however it is NOT a ripoff from Gosho, since I started to plan the plot way before I started to watch DC. I think the first time I was introduced to that certain concept was in an episode from the Power Rangers.)
first of all, a really really really really brief and short summary of the book for the query letter:
After returning from his last job, Mardock, the most famous Demon-Slayer in Nardalach, gets attacked by a young girl called Sapphire, a demon from the strongest race of the demon world, the Daemon race. After a short fight, Mardock gets the upper hand, but instead of slaying the demon, he pities her and uses a special seal, which not only strips Sapphire from her demonic abilities, but also turns her into a child and gives her human-like emotions.
Now unable to get back to the demon world in her present state, Sapphire is forced to go with the Demon-Slayer and live with him and his two apprentices, Rye and Iris, at least until Mardock decides to release her from the seal or someone comes to look for her.
While living in the world of humans and accompanying the Demon-Slayer in their adventures, Sapphire slowly learns that having emotions and living like a human isn't all that bad.
However, things get dangerous when a mysterious man, called Xor*, sets his plan in motion which Sapphire plays a heavy role in, and it's up on the Demon-Slayers to stop him
*Xor is pronounced as Zor (like Xena.....or any other word that starts with X in english....I think). I was told by someone that the name Zor simply resembles "Zorro" so I should change it.
now for my worst nightmere - the synopsis. I think the reason why every author hates to write it so much is because so much is left out and it's dull, it doesn't have the true depth of the story, and it's impossible to write it without countless of plot-holes.
So anyway, here it is.
Spoiler:
any thoughts?