Art Critique

[Kamite]

A thread where people can post art and have their art critique. This a place for people whom are either having trouble with their work and need help to improvise or just to be said on what is needed to make themselves a better artist.
Figured this place would be great for critique since most people post art here regardless of fan work or not.

Just please be respectful to everyone and make helpful suggestions.

Please note you do not have to be a professional to give advice or such. As long as you are being helpful to others.
Oh and one more thing try not be around the bush when critiquing artwork. You can be straight forward and be bitterly honest as long as your respectful.

A couple of examples you can focus on critiquing:
Composition
Lighting
Rule of Thirds
Colors
Subject
Text (Font, Size, Position, Color, etc)
Theme (if it has one)
Music (AMV)
Timing (GIF and AMV)
Smooth Animation [Time Frame Rate (GIF and AMV)]



So here I'll go first to be critique.  

Spoiler: Big Sig