Well I'll try to update this thread when I have the time (can I double post here? I didn't see anything about it in the rules, though it's possible I may have missed it), but I probably won't finish lining and coloring this until winter break rolls around, even then I have plans to be with friends. Anyways, most of the middle areas of the pages I have to improvise and redraw, so some proportions and elements within the page I'll have to move somewhat. I thought I would start off with Shigure and her chain and get rid of that first since I view it as the most the difficult part.
Original pages:
http://img43.onemanga.com/mangas/00000056/00000100/20-21.jpg
http://img43.onemanga.com/mangas/00000056/00000100/22-23.jpg
The failure lines that I have so far (canvas was resized and cropped to what I had done):
