Uhhh~ its not bad *wonder what will happen all* i like it [until now :]
Re: Thrilling FanFic by me?!
Posted: June 25th, 2009, 12:15 pm
by ShinRan36
I really loved it!
And Your english is really good
(also brauchst du dir keine gedanken zu machen )
I am waiting for the new chapter.. but I want it to be longer than the first chapter )
Re: Thrilling FanFic by me?!
Posted: June 25th, 2009, 12:47 pm
by akai-kun
Nanako wrote:
Uhhh~ its not bad *wonder what will happen all* i like it [until now :]
ShinRan36 wrote:
I really loved it!
And Your english is really good
(also brauchst du dir keine gedanken zu machen )
I am waiting for the new chapter.. but I want it to be longer than the first chapter )
Thx.
I know the first chapter is short, but it's only like a prequel or whatever this is in english (Prolog)
I think I won't manage the second chapter today because I have two ideas how it could go on...
Expect Chapter 2 tomorrow or so...
Let's see what's coming~
Spoiler:
Just a little hint for the next chapter:
EPIC?!??
Re: Thrilling FanFic by me?!
Posted: June 25th, 2009, 12:50 pm
by ShinRan36
wow I like this hint thing
I am waiting ^^
Viel glück;)
Re: Thrilling FanFic by me?!
Posted: June 25th, 2009, 1:21 pm
by akai-kun
ShinRan36 wrote:
wow I like this hint thing
I am waiting ^^
Viel glück;)
thx. the hint will be here for every upcoming new chapter
Part 1/2 of Chapter 2 is finished!!!
Because you wanted me to do longer chapters, this will be out tomorrow...
Maybe today, but that's only if I'm lucky~
Re: Thrilling FanFic by me?!
Posted: June 25th, 2009, 2:16 pm
by akai-kun
Ok, I got it...
It's longer as the chapter before but still not SO long, but I think I got it in a good way and that this is pointing to a great thing...
But that's it for the long blabla here, so, here it comes, Chapter 2, enjoy:
heyy it was a really excited chapter please keep it who is the person who shot the officers? Well we will seee
*waiting for the next chapter*
Re: Thrilling FanFic by me?!
Posted: June 26th, 2009, 8:14 am
by akai-kun
ShinRan36 wrote:
heyy it was a really excited chapter please keep it who is the person who shot the officers? Well we will seee
*waiting for the next chapter*
thx, glad you like it...
And there is one BIG update: I finished Chapter 3, but I have to re-read it because I want to guarantee a great chapter... It'll be up in an hour or so, just wait~
Re: Thrilling FanFic by me?!
Posted: June 26th, 2009, 9:33 am
by akai-kun
And it's ready, folks!
Chapter 3 is now above us!
Once again, I highly recommend to download the PDF for your viewing pleasure! Thx.
Really I love the way you are writing.. with the hints and so on it is being more excited
very coool, is kaito dead? noo neveRRR..*waiting for the new chapter*
Re: Thrilling FanFic by me?!
Posted: June 26th, 2009, 1:18 pm
by akai-kun
ShinRan36 wrote:
Really I love the way you are writing.. with the hints and so on it is being more excited
very coool, is kaito dead? noo neveRRR..*waiting for the new chapter*
Thx. As always I'm glad you liked it!
And is Kid dead? - We'll see in Chapter 4 which is now in progress, hope it'll be out today, let's see...
And last but not least, I want to mention a VERY LITTLE Update of Chapter 3: I changed the last sentence of the forum version so it is similar to the PDF version which is the original edition
Chapter 4 coming -with LUCK- in an hour! Wait and enjoy~
Re: Thrilling FanFic by me?!
Posted: June 26th, 2009, 2:14 pm
by akai-kun
And it's finished!
Chapter 4 is now here to read!
NOTE: AND AS ALWAYS, I HIGHLY RECOMMEND TO DOWNLOAD THE PDF - FOR YOUR VIEWING PLEASURE! THX.
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And here it is to read, please comment!
Magic Kaito – FanFic By Akai-kun
-A New “Gentlemanâ€
Re: Thrilling FanFic by me?!
Posted: June 27th, 2009, 5:11 am
by akai-kun
And Update: I'll now begin writing Chapter 5 but this one will take its time, let's say in two or three hours, you'll be able to read it, guys!
Cya there and PLEASE COMMENT on Chapter 4 so far, thx.
Re: Thrilling FanFic by me?!
Posted: June 27th, 2009, 6:48 am
by akai-kun
And Chapter 5 is finished!
I hope you also like it and write your feedback in this thread, thx!
NOTE: AS ALWAYS, I HIGHLY RECOMMEND TO DOWNLOAD THE PDF FOR YOUR VIEWING PLEASURE! THX. - AND THIS TIME IT'LL BE THE BEST BECAUSE OF THE COVER!