©vinsquila drawings

[Aokochan]

@aokochan
thank u aoko-chan, really thank u! knowing that I have someone who's looking forward to see my work surely gives me motivation to finish them asap! hope I won't let you down with the result. but this might take extremely long cause I have many troubles using paint tool SAI, since I'm not used to it, I usually use photoshop (not that anyone asked).

again, thank u for ur reply!

No problem!
Oh, and I think you should remove the warning from the title of the thread!

[silverbullet4869]

@sonoci

Those are really awesome  I enjoy your placement of things and the sketchy style is always awesome \o/

waaaa! a master came and praised my works! could hardly believe it >.< ^__^
thank u for the compliments!

I've never been able to really draw BO xD' Jealous~ 

noo waaay! liar! i've seen many of your works they're all masterpieces! I love them! I'm totally sure you can draw BO n_n

thank u sonoci-senpai (or shall I call sensei? you decide )

[silverbullet4869]

@toyks
you actually praised my drawing two times! I don't deserve that
but thank u! sorrry for the late reply, the forum crashed after I posted reply to holmes u.u
I take everyone's comments as compliments and advices, including yours n_n knowing that this post isn't ignored already makes me happy!  n_n

thank u for ur comment =D

[silverbullet4869]

@aokochan

No problem!
Oh, and I think you should remove the warning from the title of the thread!

umm is it okay? but they're really ugly... o_O

[Aokochan]

@aokochan

No problem!
Oh, and I think you should remove the warning from the title of the thread!

umm is it okay? but they're really ugly... o_O

Who told you they are ugly? I already told you they aren't, and I'm sure a lot of people agree with me! You don't have to warn people about this!

[silverbullet4869]

@aokochan

Who told you they are ugly? I already told you they aren't, and I'm sure a lot of people agree with me! You don't have to warn people about this!

I told myself xD so I wouldn't have any high expectation (my dad taught me)
OK then I will erase the warning n__n just why r u so nice? xDDD
thank u again aokochan =DDD

[silverbullet4869]

¼-done on coloring! yay!
note: this is my first work using SAI so please forgive me if it's fugly ._.
anyway, tell me what you think =D

Spoiler: version1

Spoiler: version2

Spoiler: sketch of ayumi

I think I drew both of Ai's and Ayumi's mouth really badly in the version 1. Ai looks real angry there and Ayumi looks too sporty (?) I even think that she looks like Sera there. that's why I tried to remove the mouths and I think they look better in the image version 2. I will try to make a new mouth for them then .___. oh, and sorry for Ayumi's far-from-symetric face & sorry if she looks like a maid rather than a goth loli there u.u

need as many as possible advices! any kind of advices and comments are totally appreciated n_n

p.s. I colored them based on sonoci-sensei's tutorial! Millions thanks to you Sonoci-sensei! love your works and tutorials <333

xxx vinsquila

[sonoci]

Wow, your first time using SAI?  Those are already amazing then  Took me forever to figure out how to get to that level, but you got there on the first shot! *claps*

I really like the way the eyes were done. They seem so...soft compared to the rest of the picture. (if that makes any sense) It makes Ayumi look very friendly and seems to suggest Ai has a soft side to her even if she looks a little pouty (and don't worry about the pouty thing: it fits for Ai xD)

I also like how the headband was added to Ayumi in the second one. Really fits her and seems to match Ai's outfit \o/

If you're worried about Ayumi looking like a "maid" then maybe adding some sort of ribbon to the headband would help? Loli headbands seem to like ribbons xD

You used the tutorial?  Well, I'm glad it's having awesome results like this then \o/

I look forward to seeing more 

[Aokochan]

Hoooow cuuute!!!! You did a a really good colouring job!
I noticed you changed the warning. It's better than before, but I still insist in removing it! You have to be proud of your works! 

[Holmes]

Oooh nice! I totally agree with sonoci aobut the eyes. And I don´t see a problem with the mouth, it´s ok for me.
I don´t have any specil comments for the Ayumi sketch, just maybe there are some harder strokes than others, no worries, I know it´s just a sketch. I recommend using the angles of the eraser to eliminate the excess of strokes to make it look better.

I notice you´ve changed Ayumi´s sketch, mmm rather, you´ve made it better in the coloured one as the Ayumi sketch lacks hair on the top, but you added more in the coloured one while drawing the uppermost stroke of the head higher. Good job!

Hoooow cuuute!!!! You did a a really good colouring job!
I noticed you changed the warning. It's better than before, but I still insist in removing it! You have to be proud of your works! 

I wouldn´t have said it better

[silverbullet4869]

@sonoci

Wow, your first time using SAI?  Those are already amazing then  Took me forever to figure out how to get to that level, but you got there on the first shot! *claps*

It's all thanks to ur tutorial n_n

I really like the way the eyes were done. They seem so...soft compared to the rest of the picture. (if that makes any sense) It makes Ayumi look very friendly and seems to suggest Ai has a soft side to her even if she looks a little pouty (and don't worry about the pouty thing: it fits for Ai xD)

I also like how the headband was added to Ayumi in the second one. Really fits her and seems to match Ai's outfit \o/

If you're worried about Ayumi looking like a "maid" then maybe adding some sort of ribbon to the headband would help? Loli headbands seem to like ribbons xD

You used the tutorial?  Well, I'm glad it's having awesome results like this then \o/

I look forward to seeing more 

thanks for all the advices! will try to add ribbons to ayumi's headband and her outfit as well ^^
hope u will keep watching my works and will countinue to give me advices!

vinsquila

[silverbullet4869]

@Aokochan

Hoooow cuuute!!!! You did a a really good colouring job!
I noticed you changed the warning. It's better than before, but I still insist in removing it! You have to be proud of your works! 

Seems like I didn't let you down with my work, phew!
I will remove it completely when this post reach 50 replies (hope it will happen)
thank u n__n

[silverbullet4869]

@holmes

Oooh nice! I totally agree with sonoci aobut the eyes. And I don´t see a problem with the mouth, it´s ok for me.
I don´t have any specil comments for the Ayumi sketch, just maybe there are some harder strokes than others, no worries, I know it´s just a sketch. I recommend using the angles of the eraser to eliminate the excess of strokes to make it look better.

I notice you´ve changed Ayumi´s sketch, mmm rather, you´ve made it better in the coloured one as the Ayumi sketch lacks hair on the top, but you added more in the coloured one while drawing the uppermost stroke of the head higher. Good job!

Hoooow cuuute!!!! You did a a really good colouring job!
I noticed you changed the warning. It's better than before, but I still insist in removing it! You have to be proud of your works! 

I wouldn´t have said it better

yaaay another advices from a senpai(/sei?)!
I'm glad u think it's good '~'
thaaaankss


vinsquila

[Aokochan]

@Aokochan
Seems like I didn't let you down with my work, phew!
I will remove it completely when this post reach 50 replies (hope it will happen)
thank u n__n

you absolutely didn't let me down! And you even made me smile while looking at how adorable Ayumi is! ^_^
Ok, then, it's a promise: you'll remove the warning when this reaches 50 replies (I am tempted to post 22 more replies, but I won't do it ). But you have to post more works so we can comment them, OK?(only if you want to, of course)

[Silverdoe-chan]

I dunno what you warn about in the topic title; these are awesome!