Kaito Kid Note...

[Kanelle]

I'm not writting it where he knows till sometime in the fic.  I always hate it how everyone makes it where Kid knows who Conan is.  How they did it in the movie sucked and it's not canon anyways so why does everyone stick to it. 

It's more enjoyable him not knowing hehehheheheh 

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4173589/1/K ... erstanding

[Kleene Onigiri]

1) At Sunset once again  (Sunset Mansion.  I worded this to make people think time instead of location.)

2) The hounds will come to bay. (Hounds as in the people after KID.  Hounds Bay or Howl when they  catch the scent of what they are hunting.  I worded it as bay instead of howl to make people think location instead of action.)

3) Oh mother crow, why do you cry? (refrence to the organization and the children song)

4) The BAKER on the right knows why (refers to Sherlock Holmes and his location thust hinting as to where to look right.  In other words you find a location on a map and right on a map is EAST)

5) Death is his name but it did not become him.  (I'm not sure about this part.  I vaguely remember someone mentioning the meaning behind Shinichi's name 'Shin" dead 'Ichi' one.  If anyone actually knows for sure tell me please.  Also the phrase "*blank* does not become you" has the word 'did' instead of 'does' indicating in the past.  In other words it's hinting that someone tryed to kill him in the past.)

6) Beware the Spirits they look to hunt him. (I'm surprised someone hasn't called me on this one... spirits as in Alchohol as in the organization's people.)

7) Raven boars must know nevermore! (Raven as in Black.  Black as in corrupt.  Boars is another word for a wild pig.  Pig is a slang word for a Police officer among Criminals.  Raven and Nevermore of coarse refer to the poem 'the raven' which is about a man who realizes that he's never going to be forgiven.)

8) Do not condone the murder of Crows! ('Murder of Crows' is actually another way of saying 'a flock of crows'.  Crows of coarse is refering to the org.  http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_co ... _for_birds )

9) Private is the eyes that must hear the herald.  (Heralds call out news.  Private as in the obvious meaning and Private + Eyes together meaning private detectives.)

10) Do not bring your puppets to show and tell. (tongue and cheek refrence to Kogoro, Sonoko, Agasa etc etc)

Hm... well... your riddle should have a message, right? Not sure, maybe I just can't put it together. But somehow it's a bit confusing :V


1) at the sunset mansion

2) the people that follow KID are located (not sure if that's correct?)

3) who are the crows, aka the Black organisation

4) In the east? Or the east?

5) they tried to kill him. But who? I guess you mean shinichi? Aka, the detective of the EAST? (line 4) ) Or do you mean the tried to kill KID? (which could be the plot of your fanfic)

6) the BO is still after him, with liquor as code names

7) Corrupt police won't be forgiven? Who's corrupt? :V Or do I read that wrong? XD

8) beware of the BO?

9) the detective must know the truth? Which detective? I guess the news is the BO. But Shinichi and Heiji know about the BO. Or is that a message to Kogorou? XD

10) your friend shouldn't know? Or what's the meaning of this line?


The riddle is good But I'm not sure what exactly you wanna tell with the riddle. And for who it is aimed at. It's from KID to Kudo? Is KID trying to say that there is a Black Organization around?

[Kanelle]

1) At Sunset once again  (Sunset Mansion.  I worded this to make people think time instead of location.)

2) The hounds will come to bay. (Hounds as in the people after KID.  Hounds Bay or Howl when they  catch the scent of what they are hunting.  I worded it as bay instead of howl to make people think location instead of action.)

3) Oh mother crow, why do you cry? (refrence to the organization and the children song)

4) The BAKER on the right knows why (refers to Sherlock Holmes and his location thust hinting as to where to look right.  In other words you find a location on a map and right on a map is EAST)

5) Death is his name but it did not become him.  (I'm not sure about this part.  I vaguely remember someone mentioning the meaning behind Shinichi's name 'Shin" dead 'Ichi' one.  If anyone actually knows for sure tell me please.  Also the phrase "*blank* does not become you" has the word 'did' instead of 'does' indicating in the past.  In other words it's hinting that someone tryed to kill him in the past.)

6) Beware the Spirits they look to hunt him. (I'm surprised someone hasn't called me on this one... spirits as in Alchohol as in the organization's people.)

7) Raven boars must know nevermore! (Raven as in Black.  Black as in corrupt.  Boars is another word for a wild pig.  Pig is a slang word for a Police officer among Criminals.  Raven and Nevermore of coarse refer to the poem 'the raven' which is about a man who realizes that he's never going to be forgiven.)

8) Do not condone the murder of Crows! ('Murder of Crows' is actually another way of saying 'a flock of crows'.  Crows of coarse is refering to the org.  http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_co ... _for_birds )

9) Private is the eyes that must hear the herald.  (Heralds call out news.  Private as in the obvious meaning and Private + Eyes together meaning private detectives.)

10) Do not bring your puppets to show and tell. (tongue and cheek refrence to Kogoro, Sonoko, Agasa etc etc)

Humm maybe I should translate it alittle better....

1)  At Sunset Mansion

2)  You (the detectives) will find some hints, clues or trail to follow.

3)  Someone crys out when there is something is wrong, Crows can be associated with death or a bad omen. Also for those who know this line hint about the BO

4)  Shinichi is called a modern day Holmes and he's also refered to as the eastern highschool detective.  He knows something.

5) I'm offically changing this line to "New is his name when death did not become him"  New serves 3 meanings: first the meaning behind his name, second that he's using a new name, third he's become 'new' or in this case young.  I'm sort of annoyed with the second half of this line though.  No mystery in it.

6)  Simple : Beware of the Organization's people.  They have a thing with stealth.

7)  Another simple one: Watch out for the police they have some corrupt members among them (also hints what these corrupt people are doing is unforgiveable)

8)  Do not tolerate what they are doing.  (using murder instead of flock is a hint at how serious what they are doing really is.)

9)  Do not share this information (only private eyes receive the note)

10)  Don't bring along Kogoro or anyone else unneeded.


So basically it says:

1)  At sunset mansion
2)  You will find some clue, hint or a trail.
3)  Something is wrong, death may be involved.
4)  (Shinichi) knows something.
5)  He's using a new name because someone tryed to kill him.  (He's young now and his old name means New)
6)  Beware the stealthy people (Organization's people) they're looking for him.
7)  Watch out for the police they have some corrupt members among them.  The corrupt police are doing something unforgiveable.
8)  Do not tolerate thier (Organization's) horrible crimes.
9)  Do not share this information!
10)  Don't bring along people you have help you for one reason or another.

Hope that cleared that up a bit.

[Kleene Onigiri]

1) At Sunset once again  (Sunset Mansion.  I worded this to make people think time instead of location.)

2) The hounds will come to bay. (Hounds as in the people after KID.  Hounds Bay or Howl when they  catch the scent of what they are hunting.  I worded it as bay instead of howl to make people think location instead of action.)

3) Oh mother crow, why do you cry? (refrence to the organization and the children song)

4) The BAKER on the right knows why (refers to Sherlock Holmes and his location thust hinting as to where to look right.  In other words you find a location on a map and right on a map is EAST)

5) Death is his name but it did not become him.  (I'm not sure about this part.  I vaguely remember someone mentioning the meaning behind Shinichi's name 'Shin" dead 'Ichi' one.  If anyone actually knows for sure tell me please.  Also the phrase "*blank* does not become you" has the word 'did' instead of 'does' indicating in the past.  In other words it's hinting that someone tryed to kill him in the past.)

6) Beware the Spirits they look to hunt him. (I'm surprised someone hasn't called me on this one... spirits as in Alchohol as in the organization's people.)

7) Raven boars must know nevermore! (Raven as in Black.  Black as in corrupt.  Boars is another word for a wild pig.  Pig is a slang word for a Police officer among Criminals.  Raven and Nevermore of coarse refer to the poem 'the raven' which is about a man who realizes that he's never going to be forgiven.)

8) Do not condone the murder of Crows! ('Murder of Crows' is actually another way of saying 'a flock of crows'.  Crows of coarse is refering to the org.  http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_co ... _for_birds )

9) Private is the eyes that must hear the herald.  (Heralds call out news.  Private as in the obvious meaning and Private + Eyes together meaning private detectives.)

10) Do not bring your puppets to show and tell. (tongue and cheek refrence to Kogoro, Sonoko, Agasa etc etc)

Humm maybe I should translate it alittle better....

1)  At Sunset Mansion

2)  You (the detectives) will find some hints, clues or trail to follow.

3)  Someone crys out when there is something is wrong, Crows can be associated with death or a bad omen. Also for those who know this line hint about the BO

4)  Shinichi is called a modern day Holmes and he's also refered to as the eastern highschool detective.  He knows something.

5) I'm offically changing this line to "New is his name when death did not become him"  New serves 3 meanings: first the meaning behind his name, second that he's using a new name, third he's become 'new' or in this case young.  I'm sort of annoyed with the second half of this line though.  No mystery in it.

6)  Simple : Beware of the Organization's people.  They have a thing with stealth.

7)  Another simple one: Watch out for the police they have some corrupt members among them (also hints what these corrupt people are doing is unforgiveable)

8)  Do not tolerate what they are doing.  (using murder instead of flock is a hint at how serious what they are doing really is.)

9)  Do not share this information (only private eyes receive the note)

10)  Don't bring along Kogoro or anyone else unneeded.


So basically it says:

1)  At sunset mansion
2)  You will find some clue, hint or a trail.
3)  Something is wrong, death may be involved.
4)  (Shinichi) knows something.
5)  He's using a new name because someone tryed to kill him.  (He's young now and his old name means New)
6)  Beware the stealthy people (Organization's people) they're looking for him.
7)  Watch out for the police they have some corrupt members among them.  The corrupt police are doing something unforgiveable.
8)  Do not tolerate thier (Organization's) horrible crimes.
9)  Do not share this information!
10)  Don't bring along people you have help you for one reason or another.

Hope that cleared that up a bit.

Yeah, cleared it up more
Tho I still wonder who it is aimed at then :V

[Kanelle]

@Kleene Onigiri  Who it's addressed to of coarse.  I was thinking of writing another meet up of the group of detectives (the people who would recieve the note).  This time including Hattori and the survivors of the last Sunset mansion case.  Maybe even some more people like Nakamouri, Takagi, Sato.  Police officers who are intellegent enough to get the meaning behind the "Raven boars must know nevermore!" and heed the warning enough to investigate on there own.  Those would be the people it's addressed to.  (of coarse Nakamouri wouldn't feel right leaving his daughter home alone and she would be bored out of her mind with her best friend along.)

Yeah I know the whole place was made of gold in that one case but for story sake I'm going to adjust that the place only was covered in gold panels that the new owners removed and replaced with copper or brass.  A entire golden building would be a massive tourest attraction would be the reason they even bothered to replace the panels.  I think in the story it'll be a hotel now.

I really need to sit down and think about a storyline.  What I have in mind right now has tons of plot holes.