Alternate Bourbon Arc
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Re: Alternate Bourbon Arc
Loved it! Patiently awaiting the next one!
“Life is infinitely stranger than anything which the mind of man could invent. We would not dare to conceive the things which are really mere commonplaces of existence. If we could fly out of that window hand in hand, hover over this great city, gently remove the roofs, and and peep in at the queer things which are going on, the strange coincidences, the plannings, the cross-purposes, the wonderful chains of events, working through generations, and leading to the most outre results, it would make all fiction with its conventionalities and foreseen conclusions most stale and unprofitable.”
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― Arthur Conan Doyle, The Complete Adventures of Sherlock Holmes and His Last Bow
"I have decided to stick to love... hate is too great a burden to bear."
— Martin Luther King Jr. (A Testament of Hope: The Essential Writings and Speeches of Martin Luther King, Jr)
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unclesporkums
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Re: Alternate Bourbon Arc
Thank you! I've actually written half of it last night, but I'm having trouble writing a convincing mystery with clues (It didn't even start out that way).
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Yeah, I'd have the same trouble—when I write, I just try to avoid it... yeah, I know—Detective Conan without mystery? Hah! What are you thinking?! I guess I need to get my hands dirty, in terms of writing mysteries.unclesporkums wrote:I'm having trouble writing a convincing mystery with clues (It didn't even start out that way).
Best of luck to you!
“Life is infinitely stranger than anything which the mind of man could invent. We would not dare to conceive the things which are really mere commonplaces of existence. If we could fly out of that window hand in hand, hover over this great city, gently remove the roofs, and and peep in at the queer things which are going on, the strange coincidences, the plannings, the cross-purposes, the wonderful chains of events, working through generations, and leading to the most outre results, it would make all fiction with its conventionalities and foreseen conclusions most stale and unprofitable.”
“Education never ends... it is a series of lessons, with the greatest for the last.”
― Arthur Conan Doyle, The Complete Adventures of Sherlock Holmes and His Last Bow
"I have decided to stick to love... hate is too great a burden to bear."
— Martin Luther King Jr. (A Testament of Hope: The Essential Writings and Speeches of Martin Luther King, Jr)
“Education never ends... it is a series of lessons, with the greatest for the last.”
― Arthur Conan Doyle, The Complete Adventures of Sherlock Holmes and His Last Bow
"I have decided to stick to love... hate is too great a burden to bear."
— Martin Luther King Jr. (A Testament of Hope: The Essential Writings and Speeches of Martin Luther King, Jr)
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Thanks again!
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Chapter 2 is now up. It's a little bit shorter than the previous one, but the format worked for me.
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Ooooh, I've been waiting for this....I'm gonna read this now!!
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Thanks!
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Having read chapters 2 and 3, I'm very eager to see where this is going.
“Life is infinitely stranger than anything which the mind of man could invent. We would not dare to conceive the things which are really mere commonplaces of existence. If we could fly out of that window hand in hand, hover over this great city, gently remove the roofs, and and peep in at the queer things which are going on, the strange coincidences, the plannings, the cross-purposes, the wonderful chains of events, working through generations, and leading to the most outre results, it would make all fiction with its conventionalities and foreseen conclusions most stale and unprofitable.”
“Education never ends... it is a series of lessons, with the greatest for the last.”
― Arthur Conan Doyle, The Complete Adventures of Sherlock Holmes and His Last Bow
"I have decided to stick to love... hate is too great a burden to bear."
— Martin Luther King Jr. (A Testament of Hope: The Essential Writings and Speeches of Martin Luther King, Jr)
“Education never ends... it is a series of lessons, with the greatest for the last.”
― Arthur Conan Doyle, The Complete Adventures of Sherlock Holmes and His Last Bow
"I have decided to stick to love... hate is too great a burden to bear."
— Martin Luther King Jr. (A Testament of Hope: The Essential Writings and Speeches of Martin Luther King, Jr)
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Thanks so much!
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WOW,....you never fail to amaze me, that speed!unclesporkums wrote:Chapter 4
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Well, as I write it's like the story quickly comes together. I can tell what the characters are going to say.
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understandable, and you did really well with staying faithfull to the characters' personality,...but I got a bit worried there when Ran blushed xPunclesporkums wrote:Well, as I write it's like the story quickly comes together. I can tell what the characters are going to say.
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I thought you'd believe that. Don't worry, it's nothing serious. It was just her "handsome detective" reaction. Nothing more will come of it.
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