First impressions
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miakakiri
- Really not sure what I should put here....
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Re: First impressions
Has not been FI'd in a while!!
I have finally started to actually publish my story! For the moment, expect a new chapter each month.
The Case of the Midnight Channel
"When a strange letter summons the Mouri family to Inaba, Ran is expecting a case. She's not expecting it to involve the TV, though.
If Naoto investigated everyone who came to visit Inaba, she'd have little time for real cases. When Yukiko reports that the Midnight Channel is back, however, she starts to wonder if the visitors are connected. Especially when the image clears, unveiling yet another mystery."
If Naoto investigated everyone who came to visit Inaba, she'd have little time for real cases. When Yukiko reports that the Midnight Channel is back, however, she starts to wonder if the visitors are connected. Especially when the image clears, unveiling yet another mystery."
Short version: I'm taking various DC/MK characters to Inaba (where Persona 4 takes place) and dropping them through the TV to face their Shadows!
Cross-posted:Case of the Midnight Channel at Archive of our Own.-
KaitoRizu
Posts: 453
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Persona series fan like me 
I like that idea (the one you wrote in your signature about throwing DC characters into the TV world
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I like that idea (the one you wrote in your signature about throwing DC characters into the TV world
)Thanks for the SS Kamite!
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miakakiri
- Really not sure what I should put here....
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Might read my story!
I've spent quite some time on designing the Shadows for the various characters, though I've only actually written out the confrontations for Ran's and Shinichi's Shadows....
I've spent quite some time on designing the Shadows for the various characters, though I've only actually written out the confrontations for Ran's and Shinichi's Shadows....
I have finally started to actually publish my story! For the moment, expect a new chapter each month.
The Case of the Midnight Channel
"When a strange letter summons the Mouri family to Inaba, Ran is expecting a case. She's not expecting it to involve the TV, though.
If Naoto investigated everyone who came to visit Inaba, she'd have little time for real cases. When Yukiko reports that the Midnight Channel is back, however, she starts to wonder if the visitors are connected. Especially when the image clears, unveiling yet another mystery."
If Naoto investigated everyone who came to visit Inaba, she'd have little time for real cases. When Yukiko reports that the Midnight Channel is back, however, she starts to wonder if the visitors are connected. Especially when the image clears, unveiling yet another mystery."
Short version: I'm taking various DC/MK characters to Inaba (where Persona 4 takes place) and dropping them through the TV to face their Shadows!
Cross-posted:Case of the Midnight Channel at Archive of our Own.-
KaitoRizu
Posts: 453
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Yeah sure give me the link thoughmiakakiri wrote:Might read my story!
I've spent quite some time on designing the Shadows for the various characters, though I've only actually written out the confrontations for Ran's and Shinichi's Shadows....
Impression: a very nice and cute girl (from the avatar so maybe I'm wrong
)Thanks for the SS Kamite!
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miakakiri
- Really not sure what I should put here....
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Thinks I am cute, or at least that my avatar is.
Erm... dunno if I count as a 'girl' so much as a 'woman'... I'm 32, though I realize I don't look it (even in a real-life photo).
As for the story... um... ~_~* It's not actually posted yet. Still in beta-phase, though chapter 1 is nearly ready to be pulled from beta into final-polish. Not sure I want to post chapter 1 until I have a more solid grasp on chapter 2, though. ~_~* There are a few things to iron out in that.... I am working on it. Slowly, but I am working on it. If you'd be up for beta-reading (meaning the story is there but probably needs a bit of editing) I'd be happy to send you at least the first chapter.
Erm... dunno if I count as a 'girl' so much as a 'woman'... I'm 32, though I realize I don't look it (even in a real-life photo).
As for the story... um... ~_~* It's not actually posted yet. Still in beta-phase, though chapter 1 is nearly ready to be pulled from beta into final-polish. Not sure I want to post chapter 1 until I have a more solid grasp on chapter 2, though. ~_~* There are a few things to iron out in that.... I am working on it. Slowly, but I am working on it. If you'd be up for beta-reading (meaning the story is there but probably needs a bit of editing) I'd be happy to send you at least the first chapter.
I have finally started to actually publish my story! For the moment, expect a new chapter each month.
The Case of the Midnight Channel
"When a strange letter summons the Mouri family to Inaba, Ran is expecting a case. She's not expecting it to involve the TV, though.
If Naoto investigated everyone who came to visit Inaba, she'd have little time for real cases. When Yukiko reports that the Midnight Channel is back, however, she starts to wonder if the visitors are connected. Especially when the image clears, unveiling yet another mystery."
If Naoto investigated everyone who came to visit Inaba, she'd have little time for real cases. When Yukiko reports that the Midnight Channel is back, however, she starts to wonder if the visitors are connected. Especially when the image clears, unveiling yet another mystery."
Short version: I'm taking various DC/MK characters to Inaba (where Persona 4 takes place) and dropping them through the TV to face their Shadows!
Cross-posted:Case of the Midnight Channel at Archive of our Own.-
KaitoRizu
Posts: 453
Re: First impressions
I'm not sure if I'd be good as a beta-reader since I've never done it before... I'll be patient and wait, good luck with it and make sure to link it here when it's finishedmiakakiri wrote:Thinks I am cute, or at least that my avatar is.
Erm... dunno if I count as a 'girl' so much as a 'woman'... I'm 32, though I realize I don't look it (even in a real-life photo).
As for the story... um... ~_~* It's not actually posted yet. Still in beta-phase, though chapter 1 is nearly ready to be pulled from beta into final-polish. Not sure I want to post chapter 1 until I have a more solid grasp on chapter 2, though. ~_~* There are a few things to iron out in that.... I am working on it. Slowly, but I am working on it. If you'd be up for beta-reading (meaning the story is there but probably needs a bit of editing) I'd be happy to send you at least the first chapter.
Impression: a good writer (I don't know many who writes but none of those who do write work on their writings like that)
Thanks for the SS Kamite!
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miakakiri
- Really not sure what I should put here....
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Seems to have a better opinion of my writing than I do....
Um... why would one not want to review their work to make sure it flows properly and that the grammar isn't a mess? Also that it's actually interesting stuff.....
I am thinking of posting the first chapter here on DCTP, if only to see what level of interest there might be. Sort of a teaser or something....
Um... why would one not want to review their work to make sure it flows properly and that the grammar isn't a mess? Also that it's actually interesting stuff.....
I am thinking of posting the first chapter here on DCTP, if only to see what level of interest there might be. Sort of a teaser or something....
I have finally started to actually publish my story! For the moment, expect a new chapter each month.
The Case of the Midnight Channel
"When a strange letter summons the Mouri family to Inaba, Ran is expecting a case. She's not expecting it to involve the TV, though.
If Naoto investigated everyone who came to visit Inaba, she'd have little time for real cases. When Yukiko reports that the Midnight Channel is back, however, she starts to wonder if the visitors are connected. Especially when the image clears, unveiling yet another mystery."
If Naoto investigated everyone who came to visit Inaba, she'd have little time for real cases. When Yukiko reports that the Midnight Channel is back, however, she starts to wonder if the visitors are connected. Especially when the image clears, unveiling yet another mystery."
Short version: I'm taking various DC/MK characters to Inaba (where Persona 4 takes place) and dropping them through the TV to face their Shadows!
Cross-posted:Case of the Midnight Channel at Archive of our Own.-
Kaito Lady
- *plotting*
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talking about writing
"Plotting since forever"
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KaitoRizu
Posts: 453
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A nice and fun to talk with person and a Kaito fan
Thanks for the SS Kamite!
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Themaninarmor
- It's not about me
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Posting a lot in forum games maybe a gamer. Always have good impressions to other people.
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ran mamijo kun
katara kare anya masuno
ran mamijo kun
katara kare anya masuno
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KaitoRizu
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Used to be a gamer but.. not anymore... life came in... I post in forum games for fun and... I guess to talk to people who aren't on the Cbox? And it increases my post counts so why notThemaninarmor wrote:Posting a lot in forum games maybe a gamer. Always have good impressions to other people.
as for the the good impressions... I don't really like to misjudge nice people, if someone I thought was mean but turned out to be nice I end up feeling bad about it like "how could I think so badly of such a nice person" but if someone turned out to be a bad person I just forget about them and stay away so I don't really care what I thought of them at the beginning...
Impression: you like to speculate about cases but your speculations feel a bit rushed to me (here you go... I tried to give an impression that isn't as good as the others
)Thanks for the SS Kamite!
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Themaninarmor
- It's not about me
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Nope i don't think so... I just want to tell them that there is another option for trick or something that need attention. So for a simple way, it is like i'm not guessing who is the culprit but just telling them that there was another suspect. So rather than rushed speculation i think it was a flexible one...Ha ha ha.. And thats why i often use word like "may be"
Oh i thought you were a boy because your avatar name, lucky for me that i had read your P info before i posted my comment. Well it doesn't matter now but because of that i must rewrote my comment.
Impression :
talkative but with honesty
Oh i thought you were a boy because your avatar name, lucky for me that i had read your P info before i posted my comment. Well it doesn't matter now but because of that i must rewrote my comment.
Impression :
talkative but with honesty
130177130179417
ran mamijo kun
katara kare anya masuno
ran mamijo kun
katara kare anya masuno
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KaitoRizu
Posts: 453
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Yeah I get that I'm honest a lot as for talkative.. it depends on the person, the situation or the conversation...Themaninarmor wrote: Oh i thought you were a boy because your avatar name, lucky for me that i had read your P info before i posted my comment. Well it doesn't matter now but because of that i must rewrote my comment.
Impression :
talkative but with honesty
I'm surprised my avatar name made you think I'm a boy, it's actually a bit based on P5's theme and "Rizu" is Japanese for squirrel and I thought it would be obvious I'm a girl since I don't think a boy would call himself such a cute name
Impression: English isn't your first language (it's not mine either btw)
Thanks for the SS Kamite!
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miakakiri
- Really not sure what I should put here....
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Re: First impressions
Quite good at English.
I have finally started to actually publish my story! For the moment, expect a new chapter each month.
The Case of the Midnight Channel
"When a strange letter summons the Mouri family to Inaba, Ran is expecting a case. She's not expecting it to involve the TV, though.
If Naoto investigated everyone who came to visit Inaba, she'd have little time for real cases. When Yukiko reports that the Midnight Channel is back, however, she starts to wonder if the visitors are connected. Especially when the image clears, unveiling yet another mystery."
If Naoto investigated everyone who came to visit Inaba, she'd have little time for real cases. When Yukiko reports that the Midnight Channel is back, however, she starts to wonder if the visitors are connected. Especially when the image clears, unveiling yet another mystery."
Short version: I'm taking various DC/MK characters to Inaba (where Persona 4 takes place) and dropping them through the TV to face their Shadows!
Cross-posted:Case of the Midnight Channel at Archive of our Own.-
KaitoRizu
Posts: 453
Re: First impressions
A gamer since you play personamiakakiri wrote:Quite good at English.
Yeah I have American relatives so I had to practice my English at a very young age so I can speak to them and I need to get even better since I might be going to America
Thanks for the SS Kamite!
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